Tour critique... post your thoughts

[Hunter_ST_69]

I'm opening two new paysites and am looking for your thoughts on their tours... both sites are similar in layout and composition. My idea is to have a family of similar sites that promise the same level of quality and content.

My Messy Kaylee

My Messy Ashley

Basically, they are high-definition video wet and messy fetish sites.

I'd like the target audience to be more than the wet-n-messy crowd that hangs out at sites like umd.net --
to help spur more sales, I'd like them to appeal to mainstream surfers looking for something different.

Thank you for taking the time to check them out.

Next job: adding them to my affiliate program.

[Ledrak]

Well, it's safe to say this is one fetish I know nothing about. But as far as the sites go, I don't understand why you'd want to have replicas of the same site. I think you'd probably increase your sales potential if you made the sites different.

And I personally don't care for the design style you used... but, whatever works.

[balls_deep]

I disagree, i checked it out earlier and couldnt find anything really wrong with the design. Its a bit amateurish and ashley doesnt load correctly in FF. But its heavy on the niche which is just what you want.

It's not the same site, it's two separate solo messy sites.

The design is current, the content matches, and if i liked messy bitches i might be interested.

I think its a hell of a start

[Hunter_ST_69]

Thanks for the input so far.

I also run Splosh Me! and that site has done OK over the years (like $15,000-$20,000/yr), but I feel that with a better tour it would sell better than it does, too.
I think the video built into the header helps it sell... it sure isn't the promo section!

I plan on editing together some tight 30-60 second promos for the two messy girl sites sometime soon, too, to see if that helps conversions.

Getting quality traffic remains an issue... you can't sell if you don't have enough visitors. To help that out, I'm working on a new sploshcash.com that will feature new promo content.

Finding time to do all this work is tougher than anything, really.

I have a full time job and do mainstream sites, too.

[Ledrak]

Originally posted by balls_deep
I disagree, i checked it out earlier and couldnt find anything really wrong with the design. Its a bit amateurish and ashley doesnt load correctly in FF. But its heavy on the niche which is just what you want.

It's not the same site, it's two separate solo messy sites.

The design is current, the content matches, and if i liked messy bitches i might be interested.

I think its a hell of a start

For the record, I wasn't saying there was anything wrong with the design... just that I wasn't fond of it (not my style).

[balls_deep]

wow, splosh me really draws me in. I'd like a differnt background color around the main page but a good design and pitch.

[Hammer]

Other than Balls who's falling all over himself, there are other guys out there that get off on that stuff?

And Balls, other than the fact that one site features a girl named Kaylee and the other one a girl named Ashley, they're identical.

My opinion? It woud make more sense to have one site with multiple girls than multiple sites with solo girls.

[balls_deep]

Originally posted by Hammer
Other than Balls who's falling all over himself

[Ledrak]

Originally posted by Hammer
My opinion? It woud make more sense to have one site with multiple girls than multiple sites with solo girls.

Or at least if you have to have multiple sites with solo girls, don't have them be carbon copies of each other.

[balls_deep]

Originally posted by Ledrak
Or at least if you have to have multiple sites with solo girls, don't have them be carbon copies of each other.

I can agree with that, I was just looking at pictures

[sunfunbill]

I'd take a look at it, but I'm eating some snacks right now and I'm not really into that stuff, so I'll pass. I'm sure the advice already given is good.

[Hammer]

I didn't check past the first page so you may already be doing this but if you're going to build one site for each model instead of having one site with lots of models, then I'd at least set them up so that when someone joined one they'd get access to all of them and then make a big deal about it. No one is going to join more than one at a time anyway so you're not out anything by doing this but everyone likes to think they're getting several of something for the price of one.

[Cozy Monica]

I agree with Hammer. It could be a huge selling point to tell people that they not only get access to this one girl's site, but a whole network of girl's messy sites.

I do think you should make the individual sites look and feel different. They don't have to be incredibly different, but maybe juggle up the colors and move some elements around. It wouldn't take too long.

I think that the amateur design lends well to the niche...

Obviously you have a site that makes money already so you know the game. I think you have some good plans going and you just need to make a few minor changes.

[phuckbunny]

Apart from the pros' advice, for my 2 cents, I think the sites look super and the fact that you have solo girls just dedicated to this niche. I promote a couple of WAM sites through Orgy Cash , I've made a few sales but I don't push them enough b/c I don't know enough about the fetish. I'd say you can really expand this and make it a big money maker, depending on how many people go for WAM that is.