New Blog Critique

[artwilliams]

I've been at it a month now with my new (and now only) site.

I've got my suit of amour on ... I would appreciate any feedback you might give me. Thanks in advance.

MILF Gazette

---art
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[porn punk]

Originally posted by artwilliams
I've been at it a month now with my new (and now only) site.

I've got my suit of amour on ... I would appreciate any feedback you might give me. Thanks in advance.

MILF Gazette

---art
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As far as design, I'm not qualified to comment because you're a better designer than me (except I'd make a couple tweeks here and there for semetry).

As far as milfs go, some picks look like porn stars which I guess is okay, except guys after milfs are living their high school years when they wanted to fuck their best friend's mother, so basically you need at least crows feet on the models to get a real bite on milfs (even though in reality a milf can be under legal age).

Basically a lot of sites try to pass off pornstars as milfs. Milf is like a fine line between mature and standard

[chilihost]

I like the design, it looks clean and crisp. I also like the search cloud feature, those are awesome.

Did you want to do a blogroll link trade? My mature blog is at http://maturefree.thumblogger.com/

[phuckbunny]

Design's not bad. Any reason why you chose joomla over WP?

[Cozy Monica]

I think you have a good site going there.

My suggestion would be to work on cleaning up the fonts and colored text a bit. You have a lot of different sizes of text and colors of text everywhere, and it makes it a bit hard on the eyes.

If the fonts were more uniform, the site would be more cohesive.

[artwilliams]

Originally posted by phuckbunny
Design's not bad. Any reason why you chose joomla over WP?

I do a lot of non-adult sites in Joomla so that is what I know. This blog gives me chance to try new plugins, components and modules out before using them on customers.

---art

[Hammer]

I like it.

[sunfunbill]

Hi there artwilliams. I've gotten a lot of help on here so It's time to give back. Design is good, pics are good. Only thing that would bother me if I was a surfer are those block ads that pop up when you go over some of your links, seem to be the ones in green.

It just seems a bit overdone having it thrown in your face, and I would be turned off. Also what Monica said. Other than that, well done!

[artwilliams]

Originally posted by porn punk
As far as design, I'm not qualified to comment because you're a better designer than me (except I'd make a couple tweeks here and there for semetry).

As far as milfs go, some picks look like porn stars which I guess is okay, except guys after milfs are living their high school years when they wanted to fuck their best friend's mother, so basically you need at least crows feet on the models to get a real bite on milfs (even though in reality a milf can be under legal age).

Basically a lot of sites try to pass off pornstars as milfs. Milf is like a fine line between mature and standard

Thanks for all who made suggestions.

I think many of the issues around fonts and such can be fixed by getting rid of the AVNAds stuff which I too find annoying (and has made me 38 cents so far).

As for the MILF thing, it seems that most of the MILF sites (MILFSeeker, MILFHunter, MommyGotBoobs, etc) are from California and use older pornstars are their models. As it has been discussed here before --- what's a MILF? --- the line between mature, MILF, single girl and houswife can be rather blurred.

My goal is present women who don't look young (i.e. minimum 30+) and have more voluptuous bodies than average yet still look and act sexy. Where they fit in the niche's I mentioned above don't matter to me. Whether that's a business model is yet to be seen but I am willing to give it a go.

Thanks again!

---art

[porn punk]

Originally posted by artwilliams
Thanks for all who made suggestions.

I think many of the issues around fonts and such can be fixed by getting rid of the AVNAds stuff which I too find annoying (and has made me 38 cents so far).

As for the MILF thing, it seems that most of the MILF sites (MILFSeeker, MILFHunter, MommyGotBoobs, etc) are from California and use older pornstars are their models. As it has been discussed here before --- what's a MILF? --- the line between mature, MILF, single girl and houswife can be rather blurred.

My goal is present women who don't look young (i.e. minimum 30+) and have more voluptuous bodies than average yet still look and act sexy. Where they fit in the niche's I mentioned above don't matter to me. Whether that's a business model is yet to be seen but I am willing to give it a go.

Thanks again!

---art

It's cool. I think you'll do okay with the usual, but I've found from experience that the more extreme the better (i.e housewife's seem to do better with cuckold, interracial, watching - not just normal missionary sex. Teen sex - you should be thinking barely legal and looking like they are not (i know, this is taboo, but that's the reality and is legal). Milf's work better with some wear and tear on them or with some props like a shopping cart or a baby in their arms (which I haven't seen yet )).

If none of these props are available, try to work something into the text that allures to it (I haven't really read your text so maybe you have).

Just for future reference.

Have a good one

[bluemoney]

Warning page is a bit bland but once inside I liked it

[artwilliams]

Originally posted by chilihost
I like the design, it looks clean and crisp. I also like the search cloud feature, those are awesome.

Did you want to do a blogroll link trade? My mature blog is at http://maturefree.thumblogger.com/

I'm interested. I've sent you a PM. Thanks.

[chilihost]

Thanks, Got the PM and replied