Writing summary for the scenes ?

[McLemen]

Hi,

I was wondering if you have little tips and tricks to write summary for the scenes. I tried it myself but I still think it's not a good "marketing" text...(ie: white slut gets pierced by needles), what do you think about it ?

Someone told me that since most of the surfers are men, I should try to write as a woman would do. I tried this too but it isn't as easy as it seems.

I'm a frenchie and I speak and read english frequently but still, there's a lot of "slang" words I don't understand which probably doesn't help.

If someone could help me, I would appreciate it.

TIA,

McLemen

[balls_deep]

horny white housewife gets her boobies pierced

voluptuous vixen gets needle piercing

curves that could kill needle play

I wouldnt' be so concerned with writing like a woman but instead trying to figure out what text will get a guy really horny and interested. It doesnt need to be from a female perspective.

[socialbutterfly]

In my blog, I write from a woman's perspective..might be easier because I am a woman lol, but I'm sure once you write a couple, it'll become easier..you'll get the hang of it and realize how you want to do it and the style you want to have..and about using slang, read some other people's blogs to get some ideas..

http://blog.hotroomies.com

[McLemen]

thanks,

It helped me, i checked on some blogs and also tried to look at what other sites where writing and my writing suck less than before (I can actually get someone horny with them).